Poss
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Post by Poss on Dec 3, 2008 18:14:46 GMT -5
Okay I am one of those people who really do not like their own work. I JUST bought a tablet and this is one of the first images I have even attempted. Contructive critique welcome. Thank you. (Oh and the feathering under his chin should be darker to add shadow, as with a tad bit more in his tail, but I uploaded the wrong version on to DA) essenceofperception.deviantart.com/art/Regal-Unicorn-105344471 |
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katielovesyouツ
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Post by katielovesyouツ on Dec 3, 2008 20:00:12 GMT -5
Oohh, good job removing the halter and on the mane and tail!
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Poss
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Post by Poss on Dec 3, 2008 21:51:21 GMT -5
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katielovesyouツ
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Post by katielovesyouツ on Dec 3, 2008 23:02:51 GMT -5
The mane and tail on the second one look a bit.. off because they're completely black, and they should have other colors(greys, in this case)mixed in there with the blacks.
Did you paint the horn on yourself? It looks very nice!
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Poss
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Post by Poss on Dec 3, 2008 23:45:29 GMT -5
Yeah I made a unicorn horn and just saved the file so I can use it whenever and just reshape it etc.
And yeah the mane and tail on the second one... I just gave up on the whole image, I dont like it Lol.
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maat
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Post by maat on Dec 4, 2008 12:34:31 GMT -5
oooh, the Regal unicorn's very smexy, but the horn should probably be redder to match his fur. that looks a bit off to me.
the horn on Crescent is at a funny angle, like it's broken or something. it should point upwards more, eh?
and I agree with Twiil about the mane&tail on the black, it should have more colors in it.
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