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Post by ^Anna^ on Oct 11, 2008 22:23:50 GMT -5
Ok lovies, tell me what I can do to better the lighting & the blood >< Rawr I can't figure these things out.  |
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Post by Lumos™ on Oct 12, 2008 9:11:33 GMT -5
Alright. Heres my critique:
The blood is sort of odd the way it is. I don't know if you were trying to get a puddle of blood or just dripping blood???
The Horse in porportion to the background is pretty good, but I probably would have gone a bit bigger than that, but not too much. I would also have added a shadow (if you don't know how, I can teach you).
I would have also given the horse red eyes or something just to make it a bit more professional and nice because you can't see the Vanner's eyes in the picture.
As for the text, make it bigger and a subtext always makes a nice touch as well as brushes beside it and behind it.
Hope this helps.
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Post by ^Anna^ on Oct 12, 2008 10:22:12 GMT -5
No I can't do shadows >< LOL And there were supposed ot be drips on the support pillars and a blood pool on the floor. I wanted to add somethings in to suggest a butcher shop type of thing, because her name means Butcher. But I can't do that either >< And I've never colored eyes  But thank you for the critique <3 |
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But thank you for the critique <3