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madeline
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yeah 'nother one! Sept 29, 2008 10:23:16 GMT -5

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Post by madeline on Sept 29, 2008 10:23:16 GMT -5

madeline-love.deviantart.com/art/under-the-blue-starry-sky-99314764

it was fun to make, especially making the horses belly and legs white, its mane red and putting in some fog ^^
criticism much desired
--but please don't say anything on the text and all,

_{avatar is my horse, ruskin, after putting his nose in dirt,}

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TheZombie
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yeah 'nother one! Oct 2, 2008 13:29:14 GMT -5

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Post by TheZombie on Oct 2, 2008 13:29:14 GMT -5

its hard to tell if the actual horse is white or its just the fog. Im not sure how to correct that...Or maybe its fine.

Great job on the coloration though. The image is rather plain. I mean the compositions has the horse and the darkening background but it seems theres something missing.

Ive also noticed the moon is...ah...skewed? O-<;;;

Lumos™
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yeah 'nother one! Oct 12, 2008 9:16:07 GMT -5

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Post by Lumos™ on Oct 12, 2008 9:16:07 GMT -5

I really like the composition of this and blending. Pretty nice.

Around the horse, I would have darkened the clouds a bit, just so it doesn't look like half the horse is white and half the horse is black.

The text is pretty good, no complaints there. Keeping the same color theme throughout is good. I love the stars and moon. The moon seems pretty good, atleast to me.