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Post by CARNIVALE ! on Jul 29, 2009 18:58:38 GMT -5
Link Thanks to everyone who critiques. I'd like some constructive criticism, and not insults or spam, alright? Thanks;
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Post by Sango<3 on Jul 29, 2009 19:26:32 GMT -5
Devious; Well, the cutting of the dog looks really rough to me. I would have done either two things. -I would have used a heavily feathered erasing brush to smooth the line from dog to the texture/background OR -I would have cut it a bit closer and then using a smudging brush smudge the fur/re-create the fur. Similar to making a mane/tail on a horse.. Otherwise it looks pretty nice.. Alyss; Kitty looks cute.. XD I would have probable moved the top text down a little bit so it wouldn't so easily.. what's the word I'm looking for.. I guess blend would work. It kind of disappears a bit for me when I look at it. The bottom white text.. I don't know I just like text to stay in the border when I have one. So, perhaps move it to the right so that the and sign begins just inside the border. Torrent; Looks good. There is a touch of dark background I'm guessing that is still there above the right ear and compared to the left ear where there is none it just looks odd to me.. XD the text "of DarkClan" kind of hides when over the tree. Maybe move it to the right more so it is all on top of the green forest background area. And maybe on the "Torrent" text make the drop shadow a bit more sharp and closer to the text. And then generally I always try to add even a one pixel black border to everything I make.. Someone once told me that it tends to "complete" the image and so I've stuck to it because I agree. XD Hope that helps and I hope I wasn't too harsh or anything. Please let me know if you have any questions or anything about what I've said.
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Post by S P O O N S Y on Jul 31, 2009 13:55:52 GMT -5
I am just going to say about Alyss. The cutting is neat, but I don't know why but I don't like the background, =/...also, what is behind the image? It looks odd to me...like you have just stuck it on anything....But very nice, I adore Torrent! Here kitty, kitty, kitty! [/center]
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