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Post by Poss on Jan 18, 2009 22:26:11 GMT -5
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Post by TheZombie on Jan 18, 2009 22:51:59 GMT -5
Okies here we go.  The biggest issue I see is is the contrast and composition. Personally I think the black ocean is too contrasty compared to the light pale sky. Then the glare on the right is a bit weird. And i don't really get why theres a building over the image. @3@ I really like how the birds are in the background though. Hmm. i really love the mane and water. you did great on those. Also, i think maybe if it there was different sky/background you wouldn't have to do anything with the rest of the image. I just don't really see the current sky working. |
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Post by Poss on Jan 18, 2009 23:35:52 GMT -5
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Post by TheZombie on Jan 19, 2009 1:09:46 GMT -5
OK WOW. The new harmony is wonderful! i love it! Its like liquid silver. |
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Post by Poss on Jan 19, 2009 13:31:36 GMT -5
Really? Thanks! Means a lot- I usually just hate my image half way through so I stop trying, but on my last two I decided to actually try to.. oh.. whats it called.. 'Complete it' Lol. Thanks for the critique, I also have no idea why I had a building in the sky, Lol!!!!
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Post by xxbloodyknuckles on Jan 19, 2009 19:38:53 GMT -5
the new one is beautiful - the only thing that bugs my crazy, OCD mind is the slight fuzz/glow along the horizon. But ocean/sky blending is a bitch >.<
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Post by Poss on Jan 19, 2009 21:55:56 GMT -5
Ahhhh I see what you mean!! Yeah I tried to darken that and I swear it came back!! Lol. I am going to try to keep my eye a bit more trained for that, thanks so much!!
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